I Sort of got it right: Chris Wrote:In terms of design (for me) the "focus" of the layout is indistinct; it's dominated by the background gradient from bright white to electric blue. It overwhelms the window artwork which, in turn, competes with the copy for attention.
The "built to withstand the harshest reflection" phrase is nicely typeset and coloured and positioned...it falls naturally with the flow.
Easy fix might be to try a mild transition for the gradient from electric blue to darker electric blue.
I think this looks better. Thanks Chis
Looks better Vinnie apart from the typo. and the product shot is now overwhelmed...be bold; sell the ba^#!rd, make it the focus.
ReplyDeleteKudos for showing all your work from start to finish. It makes it so much easier for an assessor to see your creative process.
Chris.
Looks good Vinnie! (easy on the eye too)
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